Hold on here, I'm not sure I watched the right film here. Its called Batman watching over gotham but all I got was Batman sitting around and actually watch.....Gotham.....

No really what the hell? He just sits there the whole damn time, sure I'm cool with a film with no fighting but it has to have a struggle to keep me interested but you didnt even put something like that in it......

The voice acting was......well my dead grandma could do better. The dialogue was funny as hell, I laughed so hard when the one thug was "Oh my I'm so glad I talked to you, I have changed my mind and no longer wish to commit a crime in gotham because Batman is watching"

Dammit If I was in gotham in your movie I would be stealing shit 24/7 because Batman would just sit and WATCH me take that shit! OH SO BORING.

But really nice quality and bat suit, I may be a bit harsh but its only because I saw some potental that was missed, really could have been f'ning awesome if there was a real story to it because damn did you have some nice shots of the city, some very beatiful shots!

Just work on your writting, I mean really workin on it!