Good story...a bit far-fetched, seeing as how, after Arkham, there are still normal federal sentences that should be upheld, since his murder count is catastrophic...but if you look past that, it's a creative story. Not crazy about the rather drawn out dialogue, which was, at times, too simple and at others, too long and profound. But you develop a balance the more you write. Overall, nice job. Finish the series and see how much better you are for it. Good luck