Posted by: DarkKnightJRK
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Posted on: 06/25/07 - 5:30:19 AM - EDT
Rating of: 4 of a possible 5
Things I noticed:
1. "Hello Jim." "Hi, Batman." They're
friends, but it's a bit too friendly. At
best, Bats would just say "Jim," and Gordon
would just continue. Maybe it's just the
fanboy in me, but it just doesn't work to me,
and I'm sure others would agree.
2. "The coolest." Eh, maybe another fanboy
thing, but I can't imagine Bruce/Batman using
the word "cool."
3. I agree that Batman wouldn't swear, or, at
the very least he would only say them if a
thug said it to him (ie, he wouldn't say
"bullshit" if a thug didn't say it first).
Besides those little things, this is a pretty
good story. Batman and Wolverine are handled
very well. Kudos, sir.