Well, you have a lot of issues you really need to address..

The acting was poor. The kid playing the Thug had a hard time trying to remember his lines, and did not pace himself during his deleivery of them. First he went too fast and stuttered over, then he went way. Too. Slow. Batman's voice irritated me as again, we have someone who sees Begins and trys to copy that voice rather than giving his own spin.

The lighting was poor, and the flashlight on the face was terrible.

While the costume gets a pass becuase of obvious reasons, I think that the least the guy playing Batman could've done was shave his beard. Someone earlier mentioned liking the stubble. That was not stubble, but a full on beard.

The editing was also poor. One minute the thug has what looked like an axe, than the next, he had somehow lost with no explanation as to why. Also, static shots bore the life out of a viewer. Film the same scene 3 to 4 times with 3 to 4 different camera angles so you have somehting to work with in the editing room to keep the flow of the film fresh.

I say, revise and plan out your story, rehthink the dialogue, and really practice on editing before you go forward with any type of film project.