Posted by: Catalyst [ 69.67.93.228 | 69.67.93.228 ]
Posted on: 04/07/08 - 2:36:05 PM - EDT Rating of: 4 of a possible 5
Pretty good job. love where it cuts to the dude jumping on the
bed! funny. I wish it was more of a comedy
about this dork thinking he is dark and evil
and acting like Joker, but just annoying the
hell out of his roommate. I just don't buy
this guy turning into a truly sadistic
murderer. Once it went that way you lost me.
But then it went back to being silly again
with him wanting to steal the movie before it
was released. The tone of the thing was all
over the place. either he becomes a psycho
killer, or he is geeking out WAAAY too much
over a movie. the characters and acting were decent (except
for Bo - Beau?) and you did a good job with
the Joker costume. Nice camera work, that made it easier to
watch when I wasn't crazy about where it was
going. You had some great shots in there that
made it look cinematic. the sound was well
done too. could use some tighter editing. 20 minutes is
pretty long for a story like this. I think
you could have told the same story and had it
better paced in 15.
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