Posted by: Filmmaniac456 [ 76.216.120.35 | adsl-76-216-120-35.dsl.covlil.sbcglobal.net ]
Posted on: 10/28/09 - 11:58:50 AM - EST Rating of: 3 of a possible 5
Well i will say that you guys really put alot
of effort to this. Joker, now it was heath ledger like very much
even with the lines taken from the dark
knight, but you portrayed it very well. Girl
that played Christina, she really did good as
an actress. Joker and Christina were both
best in acting for this short, as for the
others they did good but needed some work. Now video wise, i see that you were going for
a movie look but there was too much of colors
which i understand you were going for but
next time you make another film try using
less contrast and darkness, less is better.
For the audio i will say it's the worst part
of the film, it goes too much up and down at
times so what i suggest is if you can work on
for some money and get a new camera with some
boom mics and they do some good for you, if
not i go download audacity (not sure if
spelled correctly) it's free, and easy to fix
the noises in the background so it sound much
more clear. Overall, you guys did a nice job. I will say
that i have seen all your videos, and let me
say that you are improving man. My advice is
just keep watching movies, keep learning new
stuff, and one thing that'll probably help is
if you know other friends that would love to
help you out do music or anything else
because you seem to really did everything
mostly by yourself, not saying that it's bad
but it be better if you knew people that can
help you improve because i think thats why
this didn't come out as successful because
you did just bout everything. I wish you best of luck to your future
projects!:)
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