Posted by: Jixu2turivo [ 141.151.185.226 | pool-141-151-185-226.pitt.east.verizon.net ]
Posted on: 12/17/06 - 3:44:47 PM - EST Rating of: 3 of a possible 5
I like this better than the first two teasers
you posted, but I can't justify giving this
any better than a 3, and I'm being generous
with that. Pros 1- Filming at night, nice to see this is
catching on. 2- The music choice was good, obvious, but
good. 3- The action in this actually didn't look
too bad. Cons: It was good that you aimed for a Batman at
night look, but the lighting wasn't very
good. It was too hard to see what was giong
on. Hence, the action was kinda interesting
but impossible to follow. The Sound wasn't
done particularly well, it was a good idea to
use the music like you did, but the shift
between the parts of the music was executed
poorly. Also, very shaky camera work- it
worked ok at the end, but the rest was
sloppy. Ok, I know your working on your batsuit so
that's why it didn't have ears for this
teaser but seriously, don't be in a rush to
upload it if your costumes and everything
aren't even done. What's up with the
villians?seriously, they might as well not
have costumes rather than giving them masks
like that. oh, and as an artist I have to say this, you
really ought to put at least a little more
thought/effort into making the title look
good. Good luck, and take your time.
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