This was incredible! But I have a few problems. First Jason was more of a damsel instead of a well trained sidekick. Another thing is that you should have made Jason’s Robin more like the one from the Arkham series, but I liked how he had a equipment vest as more of a tactical suit. Another thing is that you killed Jason thin this as well, and I though it would have been better if you have him live for a Death In The Family film probably combined with The Killing Joke as well with Barbara getting shot and paralyzed. I know those complaints were about Jason since thats the biggest problem here, but also of them aren’t just about him. Another problem is that I was kinda bored reading it. Felt like you could have had Jean Paul Valley become the next Batman in the end for a different film if it was this script entirely like this for a official film, or maybe Lonely Place Of Dying adaptation. But my Killing Joke and Death In The Family idea sounds better having Jason live in this and have him die there. But this was amazing.