Posted by: Daniel Odish [ 71.177.72.2 | pool-71-177-72-2.lsanca.dsl-w.verizon.net ]
Posted on: 10/18/09 - 5:47:16 PM - EDT Rating of: 2 of a possible 5
Im going to try and make this quick, and
while there were a lot of missing
ingredients, the main one was originality. I
know this is based on "copyright" material,
but as an audience we are looking for
something new and engaging to go along with
our beloved characters. That of course, is
all opinion based, so take that comment with
a grain of salt. What I will say that seems a little more
factual, is your pacing and just lack of
interesting character development. I would
definitely work on that a lot more. Although,
one could say that this script was just
rushed, so you could move on to original
projects. Just be glad you didn't show this
to WB lol But don't let this script take away from the
fan film that came before it, which far
exceeded Sandy's World Finest and was very
enjoyable.
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