Not really formatted like a screenplay, but that's fixable.

Great content and dialogue, although parts were a little too familiar...I dunno, I see a two bit doctor and bandage-covered face, I think '89...stuck in my head too much I guess.

The situation could've been more extreme, since it is the Joker...but that's a comparison of styles...just seems too simple to me...he pisses Falcone off once and gets a few cuts and goes psychotic...seems like something emotional would have to happen to induce psychosis.

But a great little intro to TDK. Hope to see more from you.