Posted by: DarkKnightJRK [ 72.208.21.144 | ip72-208-21-144.ph.ph.cox.net ]
Posted on: 06/25/07 - 4:57:44 AM - EDT Rating of: 4 of a possible 5
Holy crap. To say that this is EPIC is putting it
lightly. If I can find some critisms, it's these: 1. Like someone else mentioned, Batman's
voice-overs are a bit too melodramatic at
times. Not every monologue should entail
battles and soldiers and rules of combat. 2. The "musical number" should be more
detailed. I like Bobman's idea of having him
singing "Always Look on the Bright Side of
Life." Also, it would have been interesting if there
was more to the "Citizen Wayne," perhaps even
taking bits from the movie. 3. The ending was...well, I understand it's
meant to be ambiguious, but it was a bit too
ambiguious, I think. Also, it doesn't really feel like such an
END. Like, sure everyone dies but Batman and
Joker, but it kinda feels like it would still
be "business as usual" after a while. Plus
Batman feels too "normal" after he pretty
much completely snapped and slaughtered
everyone of his rogues gallery. Also--what the hell happened to Nightwing and
Huntress? What happens when Batman comes back
reletively sane again? How do they react to
Batman's holding of Joker? Still, it's a hell of an awesome story.
Kudos, sir.
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