Posted by: Beast Boy [ 86.129.207.27 | host86-129-207-27.range86-129.btcentralplus.com ]
Posted on: 04/12/07 - 2:21:30 PM - EDT Rating of: 5 of a possible 5
Fantastic script Steve! I must admit
– at first I was rather
skeptical about following a different route
to the graphic novel. However, after reading
this, I couldn’t be happier;
the character portrayals are dead on, the
story is epic and the length is perfect for
an animated short. Alfred is my favorite character in this.
Probably the best line in the script came
from him; ALFRED PENNYWORTH; "We share a
tailor. Clearly, I've misplaced my cape."
The “niceâ€Â
Batman was great. I loved the way he spoke to
the old woman – and even
smiles (very much like the BTAS Batman). It
was a nice change from the grim, animal-like
version of the Dark Knight. Batman is
supposed to be a hero - therefore he should
act like one. Commissioner Gordon was great
too. His commitment and faith in
Gotham’s hero were
captivated perfectly. Also, I really enjoyed
the way Robin and Nightwing were portrayed.
They helped brighten up a very dark tale. I’m a little concerned on
how the story will progress without Oracle -
but, I guess with James Gordon narrating the
film, she isn’t really
necessary anyway. Once again Steven, great job. You have an
amazing talent, keep at it and soon
you’ll be writing for DC
;-). Also, mega thanks for helping me
complete this script. We have one heck of a
story to tell. ~Tommy AKA Beast Boy
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