First of all; the dialogue is embarrassing! This is grade 3 type of material. Absolutely laughable!

Your lack of knowledge concerning the characters (especially Batman characters) is apparent. The Penguin showing up at a bar, and starting a fight? Is this a comedy?

The script is full of scenes that are irrelevant, and end up going nowhere. What a mess! Again; the dialogue is pathetic.

You don't give Batman a lot of credit by making him seem dumb, and unaware of, well, anything at all. How could The Batman NOT know about Fisk if he’s heard of Dare Devil in the first place? He just seems to be an okay brawler, and not The World's Greatest Detective. Shameful.

I know that I'm supposed to be constructive in my review, but the only positive thing I can suggest is to scrap this whole script, and find something else to do. Seriously. This is absolutely dreadful! This can’t even be considered a proper review, because I couldn’t even finish reading this garbage.

I'll appologize for this review, if you'll appologize for what I hope is not your best effort.