First of all, I think anybody who sets out to make a fanfilm and completes it deserves credit. You had some really cool shots. The black and white was something different which made it cool. A couple of things that I would work on is number one the intro was way to long. Also I know some of those shots are really cool but over all I think the film would turn out better if you cut some of them out. Another thing is it had no plot or storyline at all. Next time before filming I would sit down and think through the movie from start to finish and make sure that it had a good solid story line. Over all I thought it was really cool.